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2019年10月20日 15:46

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【时】【间】【过】【得】【真】【快】【,】【又】【到】【周】【末】【了】【,】【望】【着】【窗】【外】【皎】【洁】【的】【月】【光】【,】【我】【忽】【然】【想】【起】【家】【乡】【的】【小】【巷】【—】【—】【那】【个】【曾】【留】【下】【我】【童】【年】【记】【忆】【的】【地】【方】【。】【(】【开】【头】【直】【接】【点】【出】【心】【中】【的】【小】【巷】【,】【很】【好】【地】【引】【出】【了】【下】【文】【。】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【印】【象】【中】【的】【家】【乡】【小】【巷】【是】【美】【丽】【无】【比】【的】【。】【它】【四】【通】【八】【达】【,】【幽】【深】【曲】【折】【,】【宛】【若】【一】【张】【脉】【络】【分】【明】【的】【网】【。】【每】【一】【条】【小】【巷】【都】【铺】【着】【青】【石】【板】【,】【两】【边】【是】【低】【矮】【而】【拥】【挤】【的】【小】【阁】【楼】【,】【屋】【檐】【向】【前】【挑】【着】【,】【显】【得】【古】【朴】【、】【典】【雅】【,】【似】【乎】【与】【外】【面】【的】【喧】【闹】【、】【繁】【华】【极】【不】【协】【调】【。】【(】【这】【里】【重】【点】【介】【绍】【小】【巷】【中】【的】【屋】【檐】【,】【突】【出】【了】【其】【古】【朴】【、】【典】【雅】【之】【美】【。】【)】【然】【而】【,】【当】【你】【独】【行】【在】【小】【巷】【时】【,】【听】【着】【脚】【踏】【青】【石】【板】【发】【出】【的】【“】【啪】【啪】【”】【声】【和】【水】【滴】【的】【溅】【落】【声】【,】【再】【向】【前】【望】【,】【小】【巷】【尽】【头】【透】【着】【时】【隐】【时】【现】【的】【灯】【光】【,】【你】【会】【忽】【然】【感】【到】【一】【阵】【舒】【畅】【,】【一】【阵】【温】【馨】【。】【(】【描】【写】【细】【腻】【,】【尽】【展】【小】【巷】【清】【新】【、】【幽】【深】【之】【美】【。】【)】【一】【切】【都】【是】【那】【么】【清】【新】【、】【自】【然】【,】【不】【加】【任】【何】【修】【饰】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【小】【巷】【里】【的】【热】【闹】【景】【象】【是】【永】【远】【让】【人】【怀】【念】【的】【。】【每】【到】【傍】【晚】【,】【忙】【碌】【了】【一】【天】【的】【人】【们】【回】【到】【家】【,】【听】【吧】【,】【小】【巷】【会】【奏】【出】【一】【首】【锅】【碗】【瓢】【盆】【交】【响】【曲】【。】【接】【着】【,】【一】【股】【夹】【杂】【着】【各】【种】【味】【道】【的】【气】【味】【便】【弥】【漫】【在】【狭】【窄】【的】【小】【巷】【中】【了】【。】【(】【这】【里】【综】【合】【调】【动】【视】【觉】【、】【听】【觉】【、】【嗅】【觉】【等】【感】【觉】【,】【表】【现】【了】【小】【巷】【生】【活】【的】【热】【闹】【和】【温】【馨】【,】【读】【来】【让】【人】【神】【往】【。】【)】【孩】【子】【们】【在】【天】【井】【里】【追】【逐】【打】【闹】【:】【有】【的】【逗】【着】【小】【狗】【乱】【窜】【,】【有】【的】【斗】【蛐】【蛐】【正】【玩】【儿】【得】【不】【亦】【乐】【乎】【,】【有】【的】【蹑】【手】【蹑】【脚】【地】【偷】【摘】【老】【爷】【爷】【们】【的】【鸟】【笼】【…】【…】【嬉】【笑】【打】【闹】【为】【平】【静】【的】【小】【巷】【注】【入】【了】【活】【力】【。】【老】【爷】【爷】【们】【仰】【面】【躺】【在】【太】【师】【椅】【上】【,】【悠】【然】【地】【听】【着】【收】【音】【机】【,】【不】【时】【地】【哼】【上】【几】【句】【…】【…】【此】【时】【,】【小】【巷】【又】【像】【一】【张】【风】【情】【画】【,】【没】【有】【什】【么】【大】【红】【大】【绿】【,】【却】【透】【着】【一】【股】【朴】【实】【—】【—】【朴】【实】【的】【人】【,】【朴】【实】【的】【生】【活】【。】【(】【景】【物】【描】【写】【之】【后】【,】【简】【要】【地】【以】【景】【寓】【情】【,】【既】【表】【现】【了】【作】【者】【对】【小】【巷】【的】【无】【限】【热】【爱】【之】【情】【,】【也】【有】【力】【地】【升】【华】【了】【文】【章】【的】【中】【心】【。】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【想】【起】【小】【巷】【,】【我】【小】【时】【候】【安】【静】【地】【靠】【在】【奶】【奶】【的】【怀】【抱】【中】【乘】【凉】【的】【情】【景】【又】【不】【知】【不】【觉】【地】【浮】【现】【在】【眼】【前】【。】【晚】【上】【,】【人】【们】【都】【歇】【了】【,】【小】【巷】【显】【得】【很】【寂】【静】【,】【只】【有】【一】【些】【小】【虫】【仍】【然】【不】【闲】【着】【。】【我】【依】【偎】【在】【奶】【奶】【怀】【中】【,】【望】【着】【黑】【洞】【洞】【的】【小】【巷】【,】【无】【边】【无】【际】【。】【这】【时】【,】【月】【亮】【已】【不】【知】【不】【觉】【地】【爬】【上】【来】【,】【淡】【淡】【的】【月】【光】【泻】【在】【石】【板】【路】【上】【,】【像】【一】【盆】【水】【泼】【在】【上】【面】【,】【静】【静】【地】【滚】【动】【。】【奶】【奶】【一】【边】【轻】【轻】【摇】【着】【蒲】【扇】【,】【一】【边】【哼】【着】【儿】【歌】【。】【一】【阵】【微】【风】【带】【着】【花】【儿】【淡】【淡】【的】【清】【香】【拂】【过】【面】【庞】【,】【我】【真】【要】【醉】【了】【。】【小】【巷】【仿】【佛】【是】【大】【海】【中】【泊】【着】【的】【一】【叶】【小】【舟】【,】【而】【我】【就】【躺】【在】【它】【的】【怀】【抱】【中】【。】【月】【光】【像】【为】【我】【盖】【上】【一】【层】【薄】【被】【,】【船】【在】【轻】【轻】【摇】【动】【,】【我】【的】【心】【也】【随】【之】【微】【微】【荡】【漾】【…】【…】【(】【比】【喻】【新】【奇】【而】【优】【美】【,】【给】【人】【以】【无】【尽】【的】【联】【想】【。】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【窗】【外】【虫】【声】【啾】【啾】【,】【叫】【醒】【了】【我】【那】【遥】【远】【的】【思】【绪】【。】【我】【离】【开】【家】【乡】【已】【好】【几】【年】【了】【,】【再】【也】【听】【不】【见】【那】【熟】【悉】【的】【声】【音】【,】【再】【也】【看】【不】【到】【那】【熟】【悉】【的】【小】【巷】【了】【。】【小】【巷】【还】【在】【吗】【?】【奶】【奶】【依】【旧】【在】【月】【夜】【下】【哼】【着】【歌】【吗】【?】【小】【巷】【还】【在】【,】【不】【过】【奶】【奶】【老】【了】【;】【小】【巷】【还】【在】【,】【不】【过】【我】【已】【难】【得】【再】【见】【了】【,】【只】【有】【月】【光】【依】【旧】【皎】【洁】【明】【亮】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【什】【么】【时】【候】【再】【回】【到】【家】【乡】【的】【小】【巷】【呢】【?】【(】【结】【尾】【既】【回】【应】【了】【标】【题】【,】【也】【升】【华】【了】【文】【章】【的】【中】【心】【,】【达】【到】【了】【言】【有】【尽】【而】【意】【无】【穷】【的】【效】【果】【。】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【升】【格】【评】【点】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【是】【一】【篇】【优】【美】【的】【写】【景】【抒】【情】【的】【佳】【作】【。】【文】【章】【由】【表】【及】【里】【,】【由】【物】【到】【人】【,】【抒】【发】【了】【对】【家】【乡】【及】【亲】【人】【的】【思】【念】【之】【情】【,】【感】【染】【力】【很】【强】【。】【这】【篇】【文】【章】【在】【写】【作】【上】【有】【一】【个】【鲜】【明】【的】【特】【点】【,】【那】【就】【是】【描】【写】【细】【腻】【优】【美】【,】【给】【人】【以】【非】【常】【形】【象】【具】【体】【的】【感】【受】【。】【文】【章】【描】【写】【小】【巷】【既】【调】【动】【了】【各】【种】【感】【觉】【来】【展】【现】【小】【巷】【的】【特】【点】【,】【又】【综】【合】【运】【用】【各】【种】【修】【辞】【手】【法】【来】【突】【出】【小】【巷】【的】【特】【征】【,】【读】【来】【我】【们】【也】【仿】【佛】【置】【身】【于】【小】【巷】【之】【中】【,】【给】【人】【以】【身】【临】【其】【境】【之】【感】【。】

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【常】【常】【想】【,】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【离】【别】【会】【是】【背】【影】【的】【凝】【望】【,】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【把】【身】【躯】【站】【成】【树】【的】【形】【象】【,】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【任】【眼】【泪】【奔】【涌】【、】【泛】【滥】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【常】【常】【想】【,】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【离】【别】【会】【是】【心】【的】【涅】【槃】【,】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【需】【要】【时】【间】【的】【营】【养】【,】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【再】【让】【它】【诞】【生】【、】【成】【长】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【然】【而】【,】【我】【站】【在】【六】【月】【的】【路】【口】【,】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【整】【理】【着】【远】【方】【的】【行】【囊】【,】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【心】【情】【却】【格】【外】【的】【晴】【朗】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【电】【话】【里】【欣】【喜】【地】【告】【诉】【爹】【娘】【,】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【今】【年】【毕】【业】【升】【学】【明】【朗】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【几】【年】【里】【,】【恩】【师】【的】【语】【重】【心】【长】【,】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【足】【够】【支】【撑】【我】【们】【一】【辈】【子】【的】【飞】【翔】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【些】【年】【啊】【,】【教】【学】【楼】【前】【的】【松】【柏】【,】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【你】【可】【曾】【记】【得】【,】【晨】【光】【中】【的】【一】【群】【少】【年】【,】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【脚】【步】【匆】【匆】【,】【眸】【子】【明】【亮】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【课】【堂】【上】【,】【可】【爱】【的】【老】【师】【神】【采】【飞】【扬】【,】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【带】【着】【我】【们】【遨】【游】【知】【识】【的】【殿】【堂】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【没】【有】【什】【么】【更】【叫】【人】【惆】【怅】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【依】【靠】【几】【年】【的】【肩】【膀】【,】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【背】【起】【了】【远】【方】【的】【行】【囊】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【毕】【业】【的】【晚】【宴】【上】【,】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【们】【高】【高】【举】【起】【酒】【杯】【,】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【痛】【饮】【离】【别】【的】【惆】【怅】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【也】【许】【美】【酒】【太】【过】【馨】【香】【,】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【喝】【了】【一】【口】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【人】【儿】【已】【进】【入】【梦】【乡】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【同】【学】【。】【该】【上】【路】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【让】【我】【再】【次】【仔】【细】【看】【看】【你】【的】【脸】【庞】【,】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【让】【我】【再】【次】【为】【你】【背】【好】【行】【囊】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【走】【过】【六】【月】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【心】【里】【满】【是】【惆】【怅】【的】【丁】【香】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【走】【过】【六】【月】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【迎】【接】【新】【的】【曙】【光】【…】【…】美容美发软件【<】【p】【>】【而】【他】【们】【的】【父】【母】【则】【将】【他】【们】【对】【孩】【子】【的】【爱】【深】【深】【隐】【藏】【在】【了】【残】【酷】【训】【练】【之】【中】【,】【这】【是】【另】【一】【种】【爱】【,】【是】【一】【种】【博】【大】【的】【爱】【!】【尽】【管】【他】【们】【看】【起】【来】【残】【忍】【,】【但】【是】【这】【种】【爱】【可】【以】【造】【就】【出】【真】【正】【的】【人】【才】【,】【打】【造】【出】【真】【正】【的】【雄】【鹰】【!】【<】【/】【p】【>】

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【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【常】【常】【想】【,】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【离】【别】【会】【是】【背】【影】【的】【凝】【望】【,】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【把】【身】【躯】【站】【成】【树】【的】【形】【象】【,】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【任】【眼】【泪】【奔】【涌】【、】【泛】【滥】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【常】【常】【想】【,】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【离】【别】【会】【是】【心】【的】【涅】【槃】【,】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【需】【要】【时】【间】【的】【营】【养】【,】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【再】【让】【它】【诞】【生】【、】【成】【长】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【然】【而】【,】【我】【站】【在】【六】【月】【的】【路】【口】【,】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【整】【理】【着】【远】【方】【的】【行】【囊】【,】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【心】【情】【却】【格】【外】【的】【晴】【朗】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【电】【话】【里】【欣】【喜】【地】【告】【诉】【爹】【娘】【,】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【今】【年】【毕】【业】【升】【学】【明】【朗】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【几】【年】【里】【,】【恩】【师】【的】【语】【重】【心】【长】【,】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【足】【够】【支】【撑】【我】【们】【一】【辈】【子】【的】【飞】【翔】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【些】【年】【啊】【,】【教】【学】【楼】【前】【的】【松】【柏】【,】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【你】【可】【曾】【记】【得】【,】【晨】【光】【中】【的】【一】【群】【少】【年】【,】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【脚】【步】【匆】【匆】【,】【眸】【子】【明】【亮】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【课】【堂】【上】【,】【可】【爱】【的】【老】【师】【神】【采】【飞】【扬】【,】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【带】【着】【我】【们】【遨】【游】【知】【识】【的】【殿】【堂】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【没】【有】【什】【么】【更】【叫】【人】【惆】【怅】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【依】【靠】【几】【年】【的】【肩】【膀】【,】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【背】【起】【了】【远】【方】【的】【行】【囊】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【毕】【业】【的】【晚】【宴】【上】【,】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【我】【们】【高】【高】【举】【起】【酒】【杯】【,】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【痛】【饮】【离】【别】【的】【惆】【怅】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【也】【许】【美】【酒】【太】【过】【馨】【香】【,】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【喝】【了】【一】【口】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【人】【儿】【已】【进】【入】【梦】【乡】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【同】【学】【。】【该】【上】【路】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【让】【我】【再】【次】【仔】【细】【看】【看】【你】【的】【脸】【庞】【,】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【让】【我】【再】【次】【为】【你】【背】【好】【行】【囊】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【走】【过】【六】【月】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【心】【里】【满】【是】【惆】【怅】【的】【丁】【香】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【走】【过】【六】【月】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【迎】【接】【新】【的】【曙】【光】【…】【…】美容美发软件【<】【p】【>】【<】【s】【t】【r】【o】【n】【g】【>】【【】【篇】【四】【:】【注】【重】【细】【节】【】】【<】【/】【s】【t】【r】【o】【n】【g】【>】【<】【/】【p】【>】

【<】【p】【>】【今】【天】【我】【可】【真】【开】【心】【,】【因】【为】【我】【学】【会】【了】【做】【寿】【司】【。】【<】【/】【p】【>】美容美发软件【<】【p】【>】【悠】【闲】【自】【在】【的】【暑】【假】【来】【临】【了】【,】【以】【前】【,】【一】【直】【看】【别】【人】【做】【寿】【司】【,】【手】【总】【是】【痒】【痒】【的】【,】【今】【天】【,】【妈】【妈】【说】【要】【和】【我】【一】【起】【做】【寿】【司】【,】【我】【别】【提】【有】【多】【高】【兴】【了】【。】【<】【/】【p】【>】

美容美发软件:河南专升本试场政策松读,试场难难,竞赛父亲父亲?

【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【本】【文】【标】【题】【醒】【目】【。】【以】【“】【5】【0】【”】【与】【“】【一】【”】【作】【比】【,】【数】【字】【有】【联】【系】【,】【又】【有】【反】【差】【,】【引】【起】【阅】【读】【兴】【趣】【。】【全】【文】【记】【述】【学】【生】【一】【次】【作】【文】【的】【过】【程】【,】【由】【“】【命】【题】【”】【“】【作】【文】【”】【“】【讲】【评】【”】【“】【反】【思】【”】【四】【部】【分】【组】【成】【。】【敬】【请】【关】【注】【。】【5】【0】【个】【人】【一】【锅】【;】【饭】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【天】【啊】【!】【也】【不】【知】【道】【刘】【老】【师】【今】【天】【中】【了】【什】【么】【邪】【,】【竟】【会】【出】【这】【么】【古】【怪】【的】【作】【文】【题】【!】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【又】【不】【是】【考】【烹】【饪】【学】【校】【,】【《】【烧】【饭】【》】【有】【什】【么】【好】【写】【的】【?】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【哼】【!】【除】【非】【刘】【老】【师】【是】【围】【裙】【丈】【夫】【,】【否】【则】【他】【自】【己】【也】【写】【不】【出】【来】【!】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【真】【倒】【霉】【,】【这】【学】【期】【作】【文】【总】【评】【分】【算】【是】【砸】【了】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【刘】【老】【师】【刚】【一】【跨】【出】【教】【室】【门】【,】【教】【室】【里】【顿】【时】【发】【出】【一】【片】【叽】【叽】【喳】【喳】【的】【抱】【怨】【声】【。】【尤】【其】【是】【男】【生】【们】【,】【仿】【佛】【受】【到】【了】【天】【大】【的】【侮】【辱】【,】【拍】【桌】【子】【摔】【椅】【子】【地】【大】【闹】【了】【一】【阵】【以】【后】【,】【竟】【还】【写】【了】【一】【封】【《】【告】【全】【体】【女】【生】【书】【》】【:】【“】【喂】【喂】【,】【女】【同】【胞】【们】【请】【注】【意】【:】【烧】【饭】【,】【古】【往】【今】【来】【是】【广】【大】【妇】【女】【的】【历】【史】【责】【任】【,】【向】【来】【不】【是】【区】【区】【在】【下】【们】【的】【‘】【干】【活】【’】【。】【因】【此】【,】【兹】【定】【于】【明】【天】【早】【上】【7】【:】【0】【0】【,】【全】【体】【男】【生】【一】【起】【‘】【拷】【贝】【’】【女】【生】【的】【作】【文】【,】【定】【然】【感】【激】【涕】【零】【,】【永】【志】【不】【忘】【!】【附】【注】【:】【以】【后】【若】【再】【写】【《】【拖】【地】【板】【》】【类】【的】【说】【明】【文】【,】【女】【生】【们】【亦】【可】【如】【法】【炮】【制】【,】【‘】【拷】【贝】【’】【我】【们】【男】【生】【的】【作】【文】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【据】【说】【不】【会】【烧】【饭】【的】【女】【孩】【儿】【嫁】【不】【出】【去】【。】【童】【话】【乎】【?】【梦】【话】【乎】【?】【抑】【或】【是】【从】【哪】【个】【博】【物】【馆】【的】【垃】【圾】【堆】【里】【掘】【出】【的】【古】【董】【?】【全】【班】【女】【生】【当】【即】【表】【态】【:】【“】【心】【有】【余】【而】【力】【不】【足】【!】【”】【并】【庄】【严】【宣】【称】【:】【“】【如】【果】【男】【同】【胞】【们】【家】【里】【缺】【人】【烧】【饭】【,】【尽】【管】【去】【觅】【一】【个】【进】【城】【当】【保】【姆】【的】【农】【村】【剩】【余】【劳】【动】【力】【。】【但】【这】【篇】【作】【文】【,】【敬】【请】【自】【谋】【出】【路】【!】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【眼】【看】【全】【班】【5】【0】【个】【人】【,】【4】【9】【个】【义】【愤】【填】【膺】【,】【慷】【慨】【陈】【词】【,】【颇】【有】【“】【罢】【写】【”】【趋】【势】【,】【唯】【有】【我】【一】【个】【忧】【心】【忡】【忡】【,】【愿】【上】【帝】【保】【佑】【天】【下】【太】【平】【!】【因】【为】【明】【天】【一】【早】【的】【作】【文】【依】【然】【是】【我】【这】【个】【语】【文】【课】【代】【表】【收】【的】【,】【若】【有】【谁】【没】【交】【,】【语】【文】【老】【师】【会】【顺】【理】【成】【章】【地】【向】【我】【要】【。】【而】【我】【,】【就】【只】【好】【像】【黄】【世】【仁】【那】【样】【凶】【巴】【巴】【地】【上】【门】【逼】【讨】【,】【真】【是】【没】【有】【淑】【女】【的】【风】【度】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【谁】【知】【道】【第】【二】【天】【早】【上】【,】【祷】【告】【灵】【验】【了】【,】【5】【0】【份】【作】【文】【全】【部】【收】【齐】【,】【一】【份】【也】【不】【少】【。】【我】【的】【好】【奇】【心】【不】【断】【地】【膨】【胀】【,】【趁】【着】【去】【交】【作】【业】【本】【的】【时】【候】【,】【我】【忍】【不】【住】【地】【翻】【了】【翻】【,】【“】【哇】【”】【,】【男】【生】【的】【作】【文】【真】【是】【出】【人】【意】【料】【的】【“】【精】【彩】【”】【!】【有】【的】【区】【区】【7】【0】【个】【字】【,】【只】【占】【规】【定】【字】【数】【的】【1】【/】【1】【0】【,】【倒】【也】【蛮】【潇】【洒】【;】【有】【的】【一】【开】【头】【就】【是】【:】【“】【朋】【友】【,】【你】【知】【道】【烧】【饭】【吗】【?】【”】【然】【后】【从】【“】【尧】【舜】【禹】【”】【到】【“】【普】【罗】【米】【修】【斯】【”】【娓】【娓】【道】【来】【,】【一】【直】【到】【结】【尾】【就】【连】【锅】【子】【也】【没】【看】【见】【;】【有】【的】【干】【脆】【写】【起】【了】【议】【论】【文】【,】【中】【心】【论】【点】【是】【:】【“】【人】【类】【的】【消】【化】【系】【统】【比】【起】【祖】【先】【已】【见】【退】【化】【趋】【势】【,】【因】【此】【烧】【饭】【作】【为】【对】【人】【类】【消】【化】【系】【统】【缺】【乏】【锻】【炼】【的】【内】【容】【,】【是】【完】【完】【全】【全】【不】【必】【要】【的】【!】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【女】【生】【们】【的】【作】【文】【依】【然】【是】【稳】【操】【好】【分】【数】【的】【。】【洋】【洋】【洒】【洒】【一】【大】【篇】【,】【诸】【如】【“】【在】【水】【龙】【头】【下】【冲】【洗】【,】【翻】【动】【”】【“】【适】【量】【的】【水】【…】【‘】【水】【的】【体】【积】【与】【米】【的】【体】【积】【之】【比】【是】【2】【:】【3】【”】【“】【便】【烧】【出】【了】【一】【锅】【热】【气】【腾】【腾】【、】【白】【灿】【灿】【、】【油】【亮】【亮】【的】【米】【饭】【”】【,】【俨】【然】【十】【分】【精】【通】【此】【道】【。】【通】【看】【了】【一】【遍】【,】【我】【不】【禁】【倒】【吸】【一】【口】【凉】【气】【,】【我】【的】【作】【文】【是】【从】【中】【专】【教】【科】【书】【《】【烹】【调】【技】【术】【》】【上】【抄】【的】【,】【虽】【然】【绞】【尽】【脑】【汁】【加】【上】【了】【几】【个】【“】【慢】【慢】【地】【…】【‘】【微】【微】【地】【”】【,】【但】【仍】【旧】【干】【巴】【巴】【的】【,】【跟】【这】【些】【出】【于】【实】【践】【的】【作】【文】【相】【比】【,】【分】【数】【肯】【定】【好】【不】【了】【。】【刘】【老】【师】【啊】【,】【作】【文】【讲】【评】【课】【上】【,】【你】【该】【不】【会】【当】【众】【出】【我】【“】【洋】【相】【”】【吧】【?】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【可】【怕】【的】【作】【文】【讲】【评】【课】【终】【于】【来】【了】【。】【刘】【老】【师】【先】【当】【众】【念】【了】【几】【篇】【男】【生】【的】【作】【文】【,】【让】【我】【们】【差】【点】【儿】【把】【下】【巴】【笑】【掉】【了】【、】【抑】【制】【不】【住】【的】【笑】【浪】【一】【阵】【阵】【哄】【起】【,】【惹】【得】【楼】【上】【的】【教】【导】【主】【任】【一】【溜】【儿】【小】【跑】【下】【来】【,】【瞪】【着】【眼】【睛】【恶】【狠】【狠】【地】【直】【敲】【我】【们】【教】【室】【的】【门】【。】【可】【是】【被】【念】【到】【作】【文】【的】【男】【生】【还】【是】【满】【不】【在】【乎】【的】【样】【子】【,】【居】【然】【振】【振】【有】【词】【:】【“】【‘】【大】【丈】【夫】【当】【扫】【天】【下】【’】【,】【安】【为】【一】【锅】【饭】【而】【折】【腰】【乎】【?】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【接】【下】【来】【,】【刘】【老】【师】【又】【开】【始】【念】【女】【生】【的】【作】【文】【。】【他】【先】【念】【了】【一】【篇】【刘】【雅】【的】【、】【念】【完】【后】【,】【男】【生】【们】【面】【面】【相】【觑】【,】【女】【生】【们】【也】【忍】【不】【住】【交】【头】【接】【耳】【,】【,】【的】【确】【,】【就】【这】【样】【一】【个】【鬼】【题】【目】【,】【竟】【然】【写】【出】【如】【此】【层】【次】【分】【明】【、】【用】【词】【准】【确】【、】【语】【句】【凝】【练】【的】【典】【范】【之】【作】【,】【恐】【怕】【叶】【圣】【陶】【也】【不】【是】【她】【的】【对】【手】【呢】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【写】【得】【好】【吗】【?】【”】【刘】【老】【师】【笑】【着】【问】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【好】【!】【”】【大】【家】【一】【起】【回】【答】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【真】【的】【写】【得】【好】【吗】【?】【”】【刘】【老】【师】【又】【问】【了】【一】【句】【。】【大】【家】【觉】【得】【提】【问】【有】【些】【怪】【怪】【的】【,】【犹】【豫】【了】【一】【下】【,】【仍】【嚷】【:】【“】【好】【!】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【唉】【,】【”】【刘】【老】【师】【叹】【了】【口】【气】【:】【“】【你】【们】【注】【意】【过】【她】【的】【作】【文】【中】【烧】【饭】【的】【时】【候】【有】【没】【有】【放】【水】【呢】【?】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【嗬】【!】【爆】【米】【花】【喽】【!】【”】【不】【知】【谁】【喊】【了】【一】【句】【,】【随】【后】【又】【是】【一】【阵】【哄】【笑】【。】【刘】【雅】【方】【才】【脸】【上】【得】【意】【的】【神】【色】【顿】【时】【一】【扫】【而】【光】【,】【羞】【得】【不】【知】【往】【哪】【儿】【钻】【才】【好】【。】【然】【后】【继】【续】【读】【了】【任】【娟】【的】【作】【文】【。】【她】【竞】【写】【了】【1】【0】【0】【0】【多】【字】【,】【还】【介】【绍】【了】【如】【果】【不】【小】【心】【烧】【焦】【了】【饭】【,】【怎】【么】【去】【除】【焦】【味】【。】【但】【是】【她】【在】【烧】【饭】【时】【只】【用】【量】【斗】【量】【了】【约】【一】【升】【的】【米】【,】【加】【入】【等】【量】【的】【水】【,】【偏】【偏】【没】【有】【拿】【锅】【子】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【接】【着】【又】【有】【许】【多】【颇】【有】【文】【采】【的】【作】【文】【。】【有】【的】【是】【待】【水】【烧】【开】【约】【5】【分】【钟】【后】【,】【缓】【缓】【地】【把】【米】【倒】【进】【去】【;】【有】【的】【用】【大】【挡】【的】【煤】【气】【烧】【了】【足】【足】【一】【个】【小】【时】【;】【有】【的】【干】【脆】【开】【了】【煤】【气】【连】【火】【也】【不】【点】【;】【有】【的】【边】【烧】【边】【不】【停】【地】【用】【勺】【子】【把】【锅】【里】【的】【米】【调】【匀】【;】【有】【的】【竟】【耸】【人】【听】【闻】【地】【放】【了】【满】【满】【一】【锅】【米】【。】【至】【于】【水】【放】【多】【了】【或】【是】【放】【少】【了】【,】【小】【火】【焖】【的】【时】【间】【太】【长】【了】【或】【是】【太】【短】【了】【,】【锅】【盖】【究】【竟】【有】【没】【有】【盖】【上】【,】【那】【只】【是】【些】【很】【平】【常】【的】【疏】【忽】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【最】【后】【,】【刘】【老】【师】【拿】【起】【了】【我】【的】【作】【文】【。】【我】【的】【心】【不】【禁】【又】【“】【怦】【怦】【”】【地】【跳】【得】【厉】【害】【。】【唉】【,】【刘】【老】【师】【啊】【刘】【老】【师】【,】【看】【在】【我】【每】【天】【给】【你】【送】【作】【业】【本】【,】【当】【“】【黄】【世】【仁】【”】【的】【份】【儿】【上】【,】【你】【也】【不】【该】【拿】【我】【示】【众】【啊】【!】【谁】【知】【道】【,】【刘】【老】【师】【的】【脸】【竟】【露】【出】【了】【一】【丝】【欣】【慰】【的】【神】【色】【,】【他】【和】【蔼】【地】【说】【:】【“】【全】【班】【5】【0】【位】【同】【学】【,】【只】【有】【语】【文】【课】【代】【表】【一】【个】【人】【成】【功】【地】【烧】【出】【了】【一】【锅】【饭】【,】【真】【不】【容】【易】【啊】【!】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【但】【是】【,】【”】【他】【又】【笑】【了】【起】【来】【,】【“】【你】【烧】【饭】【前】【忘】【了】【淘】【米】【了】【。】【以】【后】【我】【到】【你】【家】【去】【吃】【饭】【,】【可】【不】【要】【让】【我】【吃】【满】【是】【石】【子】【的】【饭】【哦】【!】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【上】【帝】【啊】【!】【5】【0】【个】【人】【一】【锅】【饭】【,】【可】【就】【连】【这】【一】【锅】【饭】【也】【是】【我】【“】【拷】【贝】【”】【来】【的】【。】【看】【来】【,】【假】【若】【有】【一】【天】【,】【世】【界】【毁】【灭】【了】【,】【只】【剩】【下】【我】【们】【5】【0】【个】【人】【,】【那】【么】【即】【使】【上】【帝】【仁】【慈】【,】【赐】【予】【我】【们】【诺】【亚】【方】【舟】【,】【也】【须】【在】【舟】【中】【备】【好】【速】【食】【面】【才】【行】【,】【否】【则】【我】【们】【也】【只】【有】【坐】【以】【待】【毙】【了】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【作】【为】【一】【个】【城】【市】【人】【,】【他】【进】【入】【了】【一】【架】【运】【转】【不】【停】【的】【大】【机】【器】【中】【,】【成】【为】【了】【一】【个】【零】【部】【件】【,】【于】【是】【,】【他】【的】【一】【部】【分】【在】【进】【化】【着】【,】【而】【另】【一】【部】【分】【却】【在】【惊】【人】【地】【退】【化】【—】【—】【这】【远】【不】【是】【达】【尔】【文】【的】【想】【象】【力】【所】【能】【达】【到】【的】【。】【我】【感】【到】【惭】【愧】【,】【我】【就】【是】【这】【个】【真】【实】【的】【童】【话】【中】【的】【1】【/】【5】【0】【。】【但】【我】【要】【努】【力】【使】【其】【他】【4】【9】【个】【人】【吃】【到】【一】【锅】【由】【1】【/】【5】【0】【煮】【出】【来】【的】【真】【正】【的】【饭】【,】【届】【时】【请】【务】【必】【光】【临】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【先】【写】【“】【命】【题】【”】【。】【学】【生】【对】【作】【文】【命】【题】【反】【应】【强】【烈】【。】【“】【男】【生】【”】【有】【《】【告】【全】【体】【女】【生】【书】【》】【,】【“】【女】【生】【”】【则】【“】【庄】【严】【宣】【称】【”】【,】【极】【尽】【夸】【张】【之】【势】【。】【加】【之】【文】【字】【半】【文】【不】【白】【,】【故】【作】【风】【雅】【,】【青】【少】【年】【之】【率】【性】【可】【爱】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【次】【写】【“】【作】【文】【”】【。】【从】【已】【成】【作】【文】【看】【,】【“】【男】【生】【”】【避】【难】【就】【易】【,】【“】【潇】【洒】【”】【其】【表】【,】【虚】【弱】【其】【里】【。】【虽】【言】【之】【“】【娓】【娓】【”】【,】【终】【难】【逃】【捉】【襟】【见】【肘】【之】【困】【。】【“】【女】【生】【”】【知】【难】【而】【进】【,】【循】【规】【蹈】【矩】【,】【尽】【管】【力】【不】【从】【心】【,】【尚】【不】【失】【淑】【女】【风】【范】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【再】【写】【“】【讲】【评】【”】【。】【点】【评】【作】【文】【成】【果】【。】【有】【总】【有】【分】【,】【点】【面】【结】【合】【。】【总】【写】【讲】【评】【,】【笑】【浪】【阵】【阵】【,】【洋】【相】【百】【出】【。】【重】【点】【讲】【评】【三】【篇】【作】【文】【,】【各】【有】【欠】【缺】【,】【从】【不】【同】【侧】【面】【暴】【露】【青】【少】【年】【只】【重】【书】【本】【而】【缺】【乏】【起】【码】【生】【存】【本】【领】【的】【弊】【端】【。】美容美发软件【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【作】【文】【是】【中】【考】【语】【文】【试】【卷】【中】【的】【“】【半】【壁】【江】【山】【”】【,】【它】【需】【要】【精】【益】【求】【精】【,】【才】【能】【在】【众】【多】【优】【秀】【作】【文】【中】【脱】【颖】【而】【出】【。】【得】【到】【阅】【卷】【老】【师】【的】【青】【睐】【,】【从】【而】【获】【取】【高】【分】【。】【纵】【观】【2】【0】【1】【1】【年】【中】【考】【满】【分】【作】【文】【,】【不】【难】【发】【现】【,】【文】【章】【中】【无】【不】【闪】【烁】【着】【一】【个】【“】【精】【”】【字】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【一】【、】【精】【深】【的】【主】【题】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【主】【题】【是】【文】【章】【的】【灵】【魂】【,】【作】【文】【没】【有】【高】【远】【的】【主】【题】【就】【会】【显】【得】【低】【俗】【浅】【薄】【。】【只】【有】【积】【极】【、】【精】【深】【的】【主】【题】【才】【会】【得】【到】【阅】【卷】【老】【师】【的】【赏】【识】【。】【如】【湖】【南】【邵】【阳】【2】【0】【1】【1】【年】【中】【考】【满】【分】【作】【文】【《】【冬】【天】【里】【的】【一】【缕】【阳】【光】【》】【就】【是】【撷】【取】【生】【活】【中】【的】【小】【片】【断】【,】【通】【过】【描】【写】【“】【一】【句】【叮】【咛】【”】【“】【一】【份】【关】【怀】【”】【来】【体】【现】【赞】【美】【美】【好】【生】【活】【的】【大】【主】【题】【。】【又】【如】【湖】【北】【荆】【州】【市】【某】【考】【生】【的】【《】【聆】【听】【生】【命】【拔】【节】【的】【声】【音】【》】【,】【就】【是】【用】【“】【童】【稚】【之】【声】【—】【—】【短】【笛】【无】【腔】【信】【口】【吹】【”】【“】【豆】【蔻】【之】【声】【—】【—】【羌】【笛】【何】【须】【怨】【杨】【柳】【”】【“】【花】【季】【之】【声】【—】【—】【玉】【笛】【叫】【空】【阔】【”】【三】【个】【小】【标】【题】【,】【写】【出】【自】【己】【“】【童】【稚】【”】【时】【喜】【欢】【吃】【田】【鸡】【肉】【,】【“】【豆】【蔻】【”】【时】【懂】【得】【青】【蛙】【是】【益】【类】【动】【物】【,】【“】【花】【季】【”】【时】【却】【积】【极】【宣】【传】【保】【护】【青】【蛙】【及】【有】【益】【动】【物】【。】【这】【成】【长】【的】【声】【音】【吹】【响】【了】【“】【保】【护】【生】【态】【”】【这】【一】【大】【主】【题】【,】【从】【而】【夺】【得】【高】【分】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【作】【文】【中】【,】【我】【们】【同】【样】【也】【可】【以】【从】【极】【其】【普】【通】【的】【身】【边】【小】【事】【中】【挖】【掘】【出】【鲜】【明】【深】【刻】【的】【主】【题】【。】【如】【汇】【聚】【厚】【重】【历】【史】【的】【老】【传】【统】【;】【凝】【聚】【时】【代】【气】【息】【的】【新】【气】【象】【;】【颂】【扬】【祖】【国】【河】【山】【的】【美】【好】【;】【倡】【导】【绿】【色】【环】【保】【的】【重】【要】【…】【…】【总】【之】【,】【生】【活】【的】【丰】【富】【多】【彩】【可】【以】【使】【我】【们】【的】【作】【文】【异】【彩】【纷】【呈】【,】【意】【蕴】【厚】【重】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【二】【、】【精】【妙】【的】【开】【头】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【常】【言】【道】【“】【明】【眸】【善】【睐】【第】【一】【瞥】【”】【。】【文】【章】【如】【果】【有】【~】【个】【精】【妙】【的】【开】【头】【,】【就】【会】【吸】【引】【阅】【卷】【老】【师】【的】【眼】【球】【,】【让】【人】【有】【一】【种】【赏】【心】【悦】【目】【的】【感】【觉】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【2】【0】【1】【1】【年】【全】【国】【中】【考】【满】【分】【作】【文】【中】【有】【这】【样】【几】【种】【成】【功】【的】【开】【头】【:】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【1】【.】【环】【境】【渲】【染】【气】【氛】【法】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【夜】【死】【了】【,】【黑】【暗】【统】【治】【着】【这】【个】【世】【界】【,】【灯】【光】【死】【去】【时】【发】【出】【的】【凄】【惨】【叫】【声】【还】【在】【空】【中】【荡】【漾】【,】【虽】【然】【声】【音】【很】【低】【却】【是】【无】【处】【不】【在】【,】【角】【落】【里】【也】【似】【乎】【有】【极】【其】【低】【微】【的】【哭】【泣】【。】【手】【捧】【着】【一】【张】【张】【写】【满】【愁】【容】【的】【试】【卷】【让】【我】【感】【到】【未】【来】【的】【渺】【茫】【,】【欢】【乐】【的】【时】【期】【已】【经】【过】【去】【,】【现】【在】【是】【悲】【戚】【的】【时】【候】【了】【。】【(】【《】【看】【着】【前】【方】【》】【牡】【丹】【江】【市】【一】【考】【生】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【文】【章】【开】【篇】【环】【境】【描】【写】【的】【巧】【妙】【运】【用】【,】【创】【设】【了】【一】【种】【独】【特】【的】【意】【境】【,】【已】【将】【人】【物】【内】【心】【展】【现】【得】【淋】【漓】【尽】【致】【,】【扣】【住】【了】【读】【者】【心】【弦】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【2】【.】【名】【言】【诗】【句】【引】【用】【法】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【《】【孙】【子】【兵】【法】【》】【云】【:】【千】【千】【为】【敌】【,】【一】【人】【胜】【之】【,】【未】【若】【自】【胜】【,】【为】【战】【中】【上】【。】【(】【《】【战】【胜】【自】【己】【百】【战】【不】【殆】【》】【广】【西】【河】【池】【一】【考】【生】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【开】【篇】【即】【引】【用】【了】【《】【孙】【子】【兵】【法】【》】【中】【的】【名】【句】【来】【表】【达】【自】【己】【的】【观】【点】【,】【有】【着】【纲】【举】【目】【张】【的】【作】【用】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【3】【.】【设】【问】【反】【问】【悬】【念】【法】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【条】【街】【你】【熟】【悉】【吗】【?】【熟】【悉】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【你】【聆】【听】【到】【这】【街】【的】【声】【音】【吗】【?】【没】【有】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【你】【欣】【赏】【过】【这】【街】【的】【美】【景】【吗】【?】【没】【有】【。】【(】【《】【熟】【悉】【的】【地】【方】【也】【有】【风】【景】【》】【苏】【州】【一】【考】【生】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【此】【文】【以】【设】【问】【句】【起】【笔】【,】【开】【篇】【就】【设】【置】【悬】【念】【,】【老】【街】【既】【然】【熟】【悉】【,】【却】【为】【什】【么】【没】【有】【聆】【听】【过】【声】【音】【也】【没】【有】【欣】【赏】【过】【美】【景】【?】【这】【不】【是】【与】【文】【章】【题】【目】【矛】【盾】【吗】【?】【开】【篇】【就】【激】【发】【着】【读】【者】【的】【阅】【读】【兴】【趣】【。】【这】【也】【自】【然】【引】【出】【了】【下】【文】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【4】【.】【开】【宗】【明】【义】【题】【记】【法】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【爱】【,】【无】【声】【,】【照】【亮】【了】【天】【空】【;】【爱】【,】【无】【言】【,】【滋】【润】【了】【心】【田】【。】【多】【想】【留】【住】【一】【段】【时】【光】【,】【留】【住】【你】【的】【容】【颜】【。】【你】【的】【馈】【赠】【如】【那】【滔】【滔】【江】【水】【,】【一】【生】【用】【之】【不】【竭】【。】【—】【—】【题】【记】【(】【《】【父】【亲】【的】【馈】【赠】【》】【山】【东】【淄】【博】【一】【考】【生】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【作】【者】【巧】【妙】【运】【用】【题】【记】【,】【把】【文】【章】【的】【主】【旨】【表】【达】【出】【来】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【5】【.】【自】【然】【起】【笔】【点】【题】【法】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【是】【一】【种】【把】【事】【情】【的】【开】【头】【作】【为】【文】【章】【开】【头】【的】【自】【然】【起】【笔】【法】【,】【它】【的】【风】【格】【朴】【素】【自】【然】【,】【有】【韵】【味】【天】【成】【的】【效】【果】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【学】【校】【三】【令】【五】【申】【说】【不】【准】【带】【手】【机】【到】【校】【,】【你】【们】【家】【长】【为】【什】【么】【老】【是】【纵】【容】【孩】【子】【,】【不】【与】【学】【校】【保】【持】【一】【致】【呢】【?】【”】【老】【师】【最】【后】【几】【句】【话】【几】【乎】【是】【吼】【出】【来】【的】【,】【满】【含】【不】【满】【与】【责】【备】【。】【妈】【妈】【小】【心】【翼】【翼】【地】【赔】【着】【不】【是】【,】【那】【神】【情】【那】【态】【度】【那】【是】【她】【平】【常】【的】【样】【子】【吗】【?】【(】【《】【拥】【抱】【》】【四】【川】【成】【都】【一】【考】【生】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【样】【开】【头】【简】【洁】【明】【了】【,】【一】【下】【子】【就】【将】【读】【者】【带】【入】【了】【情】【境】【中】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【三】【、】【精】【瑟】【的】【精】【节】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【文】【似】【看】【山】【不】【喜】【平】【”】【,】【精】【彩】【的】【情】【节】【仿】【佛】【引】【领】【读】【者】【在】【旖】【旎】【风】【光】【中】【穿】【行】【,】【或】【“】【柳】【暗】【花】【明】【又】【一】【村】【”】【或】【“】【横】【看】【成】【岭】【侧】【成】【峰】【”】【或】【“】【曲】【径】【通】【幽】【处】【”】【,】【使】【读】【者】【在】【曲】【折】【与】【起】【伏】【中】【心】【潮】【澎】【湃】【,】【获】【得】【无】【限】【乐】【趣】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【为】【了】【优】【化】【情】【节】【,】【追】【求】【曲】【折】【有】【致】【,】【有】【些】【作】【品】【或】【张】【弛】【有】【度】【或】【悬】【念】【迭】【起】【,】【或】【虚】【实】【相】【生】【或】【双】【线】【交】【替】【。】【跌】【宕】【起】【伏】【的】【情】【节】【使】【故】【事】【波】【澜】【起】【伏】【,】【扣】【人】【心】【弦】【。】【“】【情】【节】【突】【转】【”】【的】【手】【法】【,】【令】【人】【拍】【案】【叫】【绝】【!】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【期】【末】【考】【试】【到】【了】【,】【我】【聚】【精】【会】【神】【地】【趴】【在】【桌】【子】【上】【复】【习】【着】【。】【不】【知】【何】【时】【,】【阳】【光】【笼】【罩】【了】【我】【,】【使】【我】【额】【头】【沁】【出】【了】【汗】【珠】【。】【这】【时】【,】【数】【学】【老】【师】【又】【一】【次】【敲】【响】【了】【我】【的】【桌】【子】【:】【“】【你】【,】【坐】【到】【那】【边】【去】【考】【试】【。】【”】【我】【愣】【住】【了】【。】【老】【师】【竟】【然】【对】【我】【如】【此】【不】【信】【任】【!】【老】【师】【对】【我】【的】【成】【见】【竟】【然】【有】【这】【么】【深】【!】【我】【再】【也】【忍】【耐】【不】【住】【,】【泪】【水】【就】【要】【冲】【出】【眼】【眶】【了】【。】【老】【师】【也】【愣】【住】【了】【,】【随】【即】【,】【他】【似】【乎】【明】【白】【了】【什】【么】【,】【轻】【轻】【地】【对】【我】【说】【:】【“】【这】【里】【太】【晒】【,】【影】【响】【你】【做】【题】【。】【”】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【原】【来】【如】【此】【。】【原】【本】【以】【为】【老】【师】【误】【解】【了】【我】【,】【谁】【知】【却】【是】【我】【误】【解】【了】【老】【师】【!】【我】【的】【泪】【水】【不】【由】【得】【流】【了】【出】【来】【…】【…】【(】【《】【阳】【光】【灿】【烂】【的】【日】【子】【》】【山】【东】【济】【南】【一】【考】【生】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【本】【是】【一】【件】【考】【试】【时】【调】【换】【座】【位】【的】【平】【常】【小】【事】【,】【被】【作】【者】【精】【心】【打】【造】【后】【,】【使】【文】【章】【前】【后】【隋】【节】【突】【转】【,】【波】【澜】【顿】【生】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【四】【、】【精】【当】【的】【措】【词】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【山】【不】【在】【高】【,】【有】【仙】【则】【名】【;】【水】【不】【在】【深】【,】【有】【龙】【则】【灵】【”】【。】【作】【文】【中】【的】【措】【词】【更】【不】【在】【多】【,】【精】【当】【的】【措】【词】【有】【着】【“】【四】【两】【拨】【千】【斤】【”】【的】【显】【著】【效】【果】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【时】【间】【白】【驹】【过】【隙】【般】【滑】【过】【爸】【爸】【的】【背】【,】【掠】【过】【爷】【爷】【的】【胡】【子】【,】【穿】【过】【我】【的】【指】【间】【,】【而】【我】【的】【那】【颗】【童】【心】【也】【慢】【慢】【成】【长】【了】【。】【(】【《】【长】【大】【的】【童】【心】【》】【浙】【江】【温】【州】【一】【考】【生】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【“】【滑】【”】【“】【掠】【”】【“】【穿】【”】【三】【个】【动】【词】【生】【动】【地】【展】【现】【了】【时】【光】【飞】【逝】【,】【“】【我】【”】【的】【童】【心】【就】【在】【不】【知】【不】【觉】【中】【长】【大】【了】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【如】【果】【天】【空】【不】【宽】【容】【,】【容】【忍】【不】【了】【风】【雨】【雷】【电】【的】【一】【时】【肆】【虐】【,】【何】【来】【它】【的】【辽】【阔】【之】【美】【;】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【如】【果】【大】【海】【不】【宽】【容】【,】【容】【忍】【不】【了】【惊】【涛】【骇】【浪】【的】【一】【时】【猖】【獗】【,】【何】【来】【它】【的】【深】【邃】【之】【美】【;】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【如】【果】【森】【林】【不】【宽】【容】【。】【容】【忍】【不】【了】【弱】【肉】【强】【食】【的】【一】【时】【规】【律】【,】【何】【来】【它】【的】【原】【始】【之】【美】【;】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【如】【果】【宇】【宙】【不】【宽】【容】【,】【容】【忍】【不】【了】【星】【座】【裂】【变】【的】【一】【时】【更】【替】【,】【何】【来】【它】【的】【神】【秘】【之】【美】【;】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【如】【果】【时】【间】【不】【宽】【容】【,】【容】【忍】【不】【了】【各】【色】【人】【等】【的】【一】【时】【虚】【掷】【,】【何】【来】【它】【的】【延】【续】【之】【美】【…】【…】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【是】【宽】【容】【成】【就】【了】【它】【们】【。】【(】【《】【告】【别】【狭】【隘】【之】【心】【》】【一】【考】【毕】【)】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【这】【段】【文】【字】【语】【言】【流】【畅】【,】【用】【词】【精】【练】【,】【运】【用】【铺】【陈】【排】【比】【的】【手】【法】【,】【使】【文】【章】【更】【具】【思】【维】【的】【深】【度】【。】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【五】【、】【精】【练】【的】【叙】【述】【<】【b】【r】【>】【 】【 】【作】【文】【中】【或】【用】【巧】【妙】【的】【手】【法】【,】【或】【用】【恰】【当】【的】【顺】【序】【,】【使】【叙】【述】【顺】【畅】【精】【彩】【,】【但】【这】【并】【不】【意】【味】【着】【叙】【述】【得】【越】【多】【越】【好】【,】【而】【是】【以】【简】【洁】【明】【了】【为】【妙】【。】【只】【有】【内】【涵】【深】【刻】【、】【情】【节】【生】【动】【、】【能】【突】【出】【主】【题】【的】【具】【体】【材】【料】【才】【详】【写】【,】【次】【要】【作】【用】【的】【内】【容】【就】【只】【能】【作】【概】【括】【叙】【述】【。】【精】【练】【的】【叙】【述】【使】【文】【章】【清】【晰】【利】【落】【,】【结】【构】【紧】【凑】【。】【如】【南】【京】【中】【考】【满】【分】【作】【文】【《】【也】【是】【一】【堂】【语】【文】【课】【》】【是】【从】【不】【同】【角】【度】【选】【择】【典】【型】【事】【例】【来】【突】【出】【中】【心】【的】【。】【有】【给】【网】【上】【的】【信】【箱】【发】【勘】【误】【信】【,】【以】【突】【出】【从】【生】【活】【中】【学】【语】【文】【的】【自】【豪】【感】【受】【;】【有】【参】【加】【学】【校】【艺】【术】【节】【的】【朗】【诵】【表】【演】【活】【动】【,】【以】【突】【出】【从】【生】【活】【中】【学】【语】【文】【的】【成】【果】【;】【有】【春】【节】【家】【庭】【联】【欢】【会】【接】【对】【联】【比】【赛】【,】【以】【突】【出】【从】【生】【活】【中】【学】【语】【文】【的】【快】【乐】【。】【三】【件】【事】【例】【紧】【扣】【生】【活】【“】【也】【是】【一】【堂】【语】【文】【课】【”】【这】【一】【中】【心】【,】【有】【真】【情】【实】【感】【,】【又】【详】【略】【有】【致】【。】【其】【中】【第】【三】【件】【事】【最】【有】【代】【表】【性】【,】【也】【很】【风】【趣】【,】【作】【者】【就】【突】【出】【的】【对】【话】【与】【心】【理】【进】【行】【详】【写】【,】【而】【其】【他】【两】【事】【就】【略】【写】【。】【这】【样】【精】【练】【的】【处】【理】【有】【助】【于】【凸】【现】【文】【章】【主】【旨】【。】

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